Nora
11/4/2019 08:59:08 am
I love the playfulness of the colors and how you put the title! The lowercase compliments the vibe of your poster and the colors draw your eye across the page. I see exactly what you were going for with the graphic on the bottom and it looks really good. My only critique/question is the shadows on the reflection in the water and if it'd be better without them or not.
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Cole
11/4/2019 10:56:40 am
I really like the colors and font, they represent the fantastical element of copenhagen. I also really like the creative decision to add the reflections of the building, which really showcases the water. This was a really good way to show water without having a confusing mess of blue letters at the bottom of the page.
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Emma
11/4/2019 11:09:02 am
I really like the colors you used on the poster and how you repeated some of these colors through the buildings and the title. I also think that the yellow of your title contrasts well with your blue background. The brush lettering of your title communicates the playful tone you were going for. I like the size of the title, however you could experiment with making it larger to fill the empty space on the upper right side of your poster. I also think that the reflection of the buildings was a nice touch and certainly filled the negative space of your poster in an effective way. I think that if you were to make the reflection a tad subtler, ex. shadow or no shadow, in order to draw the viewer's attention to the main component of your poster-- the strip of buildings (not the reflection). Overall, I really like this design, well done!
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Ari
11/4/2019 11:21:56 am
I really love how you styled the buildings and used their reflection to give an impression of water! I love your color scheme and title font choice; their combination gives a very lively and playful impression for the rest of the graphic. I feel like I want to see more of your graphic designs than the large body text, though. Maybe if the body text was somehow reflected in the graphic?
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Ethan
11/4/2019 11:31:55 am
This looks great. The colors work really well together and have a nice look lined up together. I really like what you did with the reflection. The only thing I would change is the title. First, the capitaqlization, but also maybe experiment with some other colors. I think it could look cool if you used a color that you didnt use in the houses, but one that still coordinates with the entirety of the graphic. Overall great job!
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Michelle
11/4/2019 01:10:53 pm
I really like what you did that with the buildings and I think it is so cool that you matched the yellow for the font with the middle house. The playfulness of the buildings is clearly reflected in the title. I think the shadow, though, can be cleaner? Maybe a little less would be better for contrast.
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